Comments on: Brainstorming at the Mall http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/ Hard to Intimidate, Too Damned Drunk to Care Thu, 08 Jan 2009 23:01:39 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Marnee Jo http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4375 Marnee Jo Fri, 04 Apr 2008 03:03:25 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4375 Santa! I didn't think to put the three together, but that was great. :) And I love your paranormal spin. Santa! I didn’t think to put the three together, but that was great. :) And I love your paranormal spin.

]]> By: Santa http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4374 Santa Fri, 04 Apr 2008 02:46:57 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4374 I love to people watch. I do it all the time and it's a fringe benefit of being a Deli Diva. People are amazing. Couples are fascinating, particularly young ones. Lots of body language. Flipping of hair. Rolling of eyes. Some cuddle. Some barely look at one another. Here's my take on the three tables: 1.If I stare at that column long enough maybe the Polzarians will finally get here and take me back behind the veil. I can't use any of my powers here. So many people in one place and not one of them open to the mystics. I fear that if I am not taken soon, my essence will have evaporated and I'll be stuck here, staring into space, not ever saying a word again to my life-mate. 2. Do you think she can hear me, Ferron?, the old man thought to his mate. No matter how hard I concentrate, she won't take her eyes off that column. Didn't she read the mage guide? She's to stare off at a Cullum, not a column. She'll never get out of here! Come now, Cullum! You must be patient. Use your wiles to lure her back to us. I've no wiles, Ferron! I can only muster up 'congenial old man'. Syreen grabbed the wiles potion. Oh, be quiet and leave the mysticism to me! 3. Syreen clicked on the rolling eyes emoticon as she furiously text into her palmer. Just wrest it away from the crusty old man and get on with it. Jemma texted back. We should get another to lure her home. After all, one Cullum is as good as the next. This time I'll scatter my wiles over him. Jemma wrested control from the old woman and with a flick of her wrist, she scattered her wiles on the old man transforming him in a blink of an eye. The solitary woman felt her pearls heat against her breast. She turned her head as a sheen of particles, caught the sunshine filtering down from the skylights, fell upon the elderly couple. She blinked, her eyes like saucers of elfen nectar, as she stared agog at the Colin before her. She nodded, smiling and held out her hand. That was it. A Cullum would beckon you but a Colin would always bring you home. I love to people watch. I do it all the time and it’s a fringe benefit of being a Deli Diva. People are amazing. Couples are fascinating, particularly young ones. Lots of body language. Flipping of hair. Rolling of eyes. Some cuddle. Some barely look at one another.

Here’s my take on the three tables:

1.If I stare at that column long enough maybe the Polzarians will finally get here and take me back behind the veil. I can’t use any of my powers here. So many people in one place and not one of them open to the mystics. I fear that if I am not taken soon, my essence will have evaporated and I’ll be stuck here, staring into space, not ever saying a word again to my life-mate.

2. Do you think she can hear me, Ferron?, the old man thought to his mate. No matter how hard I concentrate, she won’t take her eyes off that column. Didn’t she read the mage guide? She’s to stare off at a Cullum, not a column. She’ll never get out of here!

Come now, Cullum! You must be patient. Use your wiles to lure her back to us.

I’ve no wiles, Ferron! I can only muster up ‘congenial old man’. Syreen grabbed the wiles potion.

Oh, be quiet and leave the mysticism to me!

3. Syreen clicked on the rolling eyes emoticon as she furiously text into her palmer.

Just wrest it away from the crusty old man and get on with it. Jemma texted back. We should get another to lure her home. After all, one Cullum is as good as the next. This time I’ll scatter my wiles over him.

Jemma wrested control from the old woman and with a flick of her wrist, she scattered her wiles on the old man transforming him in a blink of an eye.

The solitary woman felt her pearls heat against her breast. She turned her head as a sheen of particles, caught the sunshine filtering down from the skylights, fell upon the elderly couple. She blinked, her eyes like saucers of elfen nectar, as she stared agog at the Colin before her.

She nodded, smiling and held out her hand. That was it. A Cullum would beckon you but a Colin would always bring you home.

]]> By: Marnee Jo http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4373 Marnee Jo Thu, 03 Apr 2008 20:41:55 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4373 I love the third one Kelly. BFFs, huh? LOL!! You should people watch! It's good fun! I love the third one Kelly. BFFs, huh? LOL!!

You should people watch! It’s good fun!

]]> By: Kelly Krysten http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4372 Kelly Krysten Thu, 03 Apr 2008 19:19:27 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4372 I've never been people watching. The idea of it is interesting, though. I haven't read anyone else's ideas yet, but here are mine. Sorry if any of them are somone else's. Number one has daddy issues and hates men. Number two have never met before today. They're on a blind date and it's not going well. Number three are best friends for life. They are calling their moms' to ask for more time out. I’ve never been people watching. The idea of it is interesting, though. I haven’t read anyone else’s ideas yet, but here are mine. Sorry if any of them are somone else’s.

Number one has daddy issues and hates men.

Number two have never met before today. They’re on a blind date and it’s not going well.

Number three are best friends for life. They are calling their moms’ to ask for more time out.

]]> By: Marnee Jo http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4371 Marnee Jo Thu, 03 Apr 2008 17:55:06 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4371 Janga - I completely understand about 3 being close to home. And her being pregnant! What a good twist! :) Roger and Dana are sad though. Sin - lung cancer. So sad. And I remember those days of getting ready for prom. LOL! Great imagery. The bookstore and library are great places. B&N, with the Starbucks. Best mixture of all worlds. :) Janga - I completely understand about 3 being close to home. And her being pregnant! What a good twist! :) Roger and Dana are sad though.

Sin - lung cancer. So sad. And I remember those days of getting ready for prom. LOL! Great imagery.

The bookstore and library are great places. B&N, with the Starbucks. Best mixture of all worlds. :)

]]> By: Kathy http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4370 Kathy Thu, 03 Apr 2008 17:28:43 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4370 I agree, Sin. The Library and bookstore are interesting places to watch people. What people choose to read says a lot about them. I agree, Sin. The Library and bookstore are interesting places to watch people. What people choose to read says a lot about them.

]]> By: Janga http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4369 Janga Thu, 03 Apr 2008 17:12:44 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4369 Great minds, Sin! LOL! Great minds, Sin! LOL!

]]> By: Sin http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4368 Sin Thu, 03 Apr 2008 15:59:26 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4368 PS. I love to go to B&N and watch the people in there. Just like the library. I do that at the library too. PS. I love to go to B&N and watch the people in there. Just like the library. I do that at the library too.

]]> By: Tiffany http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4367 Tiffany Thu, 03 Apr 2008 15:55:42 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4367 I like people watching. At work we have the same people go by every day, and the receptionist lives in the area, so usually fills me in on some of their stories. People are fascinating, as I'm wont to say. I like people watching. At work we have the same people go by every day, and the receptionist lives in the area, so usually fills me in on some of their stories. People are fascinating, as I’m wont to say.

]]> By: Sin http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/03/brainstorming-at-the-mall/#comment-4366 Sin Thu, 03 Apr 2008 15:47:10 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=174#comment-4366 Janga- I had the same idea. LOL. Janga- I had the same idea. LOL.

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