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		<title>By: Hellion</title>
		<link>http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/08/making-your-own-metaphors/#comment-4545</link>
		<dc:creator>Hellion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Apr 2008 13:19:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kathy, I love historical battlefields. I'm just making fun of Tiff because we vacationed together (with Terri) and saw Yorktown, Williamsburg, et al. While looking at the Yorktown battlefield, Tiff, nearly swooning from the humidity, gave a grumpy look and said, "It looks like a field." Which, yes, it *does*.

I'm really geeky and enjoy historical re-enactments. Not too big on Civil War ones, but they are fascinating; I'd love to see a Revolutionary War re-enactment. 

Amanda, definitely go check out Marsha Moyer! I don't know if I could exactly pinpoint what it is about a particular sentence that makes me like it so much. As I said: she and I are using the same dictionary of words; she's just using them better. I suppose the key is that what you write is supposed to clarify, explain, create the character on the page--and if what you use does these things so well that a reader feels this person is surely someone who exists in the world because they've felt the exact same way the character's feeling, they've just have never been able to describe it so effectively...that's brilliant writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kathy, I love historical battlefields. I&#8217;m just making fun of Tiff because we vacationed together (with Terri) and saw Yorktown, Williamsburg, et al. While looking at the Yorktown battlefield, Tiff, nearly swooning from the humidity, gave a grumpy look and said, &#8220;It looks like a field.&#8221; Which, yes, it *does*.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m really geeky and enjoy historical re-enactments. Not too big on Civil War ones, but they are fascinating; I&#8217;d love to see a Revolutionary War re-enactment. </p>
<p>Amanda, definitely go check out Marsha Moyer! I don&#8217;t know if I could exactly pinpoint what it is about a particular sentence that makes me like it so much. As I said: she and I are using the same dictionary of words; she&#8217;s just using them better. I suppose the key is that what you write is supposed to clarify, explain, create the character on the page&#8211;and if what you use does these things so well that a reader feels this person is surely someone who exists in the world because they&#8217;ve felt the exact same way the character&#8217;s feeling, they&#8217;ve just have never been able to describe it so effectively&#8230;that&#8217;s brilliant writing.</p>
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		<title>By: Kathy</title>
		<link>http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/08/making-your-own-metaphors/#comment-4538</link>
		<dc:creator>Kathy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Apr 2008 03:24:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great blog!  Sorry I'm chiming in so late.  Y'all will probably never see this but I'll give it a go.

I'm as full as a tick.

Hotter than a hornet.

Heavens to Betsy.

The (bleep's) going to hit the fan.

E-gads!

'It's goin' to come a flood' or 'It's raining cats and dogs' or 'It come a gully washer'.

Oh, I'd love to be stranded on an historical battlefield.  Problem is, I'd never want to leave!  That is, until I got hungry and couldn't hunt my own game.  I love historical battlefields, Hellion.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great blog!  Sorry I&#8217;m chiming in so late.  Y&#8217;all will probably never see this but I&#8217;ll give it a go.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m as full as a tick.</p>
<p>Hotter than a hornet.</p>
<p>Heavens to Betsy.</p>
<p>The (bleep&#8217;s) going to hit the fan.</p>
<p>E-gads!</p>
<p>&#8216;It&#8217;s goin&#8217; to come a flood&#8217; or &#8216;It&#8217;s raining cats and dogs&#8217; or &#8216;It come a gully washer&#8217;.</p>
<p>Oh, I&#8217;d love to be stranded on an historical battlefield.  Problem is, I&#8217;d never want to leave!  That is, until I got hungry and couldn&#8217;t hunt my own game.  I love historical battlefields, Hellion.</p>
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		<title>By: Amanda</title>
		<link>http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/08/making-your-own-metaphors/#comment-4537</link>
		<dc:creator>Amanda</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 23:58:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hellion, I was thinking about your blog all day.

I think I will be checking out Marsha Moyer.  I love what different authors can do with language but I'm like Irish in that I shudder to try and analyze why I liked it at the metaphor level.  I like to say I liked it or I didn't like it.  My husband who minored in English gets exasperated with me when I try to disparage my literary knowledge--never felt like English was my strong suit. 

I loved Eloisa's love scene with Josie and Mayne where she used the phrase "like a forgiving wind...".  Sorry I can't remember the rest.

How about the medical--"He was on me like a rash".</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hellion, I was thinking about your blog all day.</p>
<p>I think I will be checking out Marsha Moyer.  I love what different authors can do with language but I&#8217;m like Irish in that I shudder to try and analyze why I liked it at the metaphor level.  I like to say I liked it or I didn&#8217;t like it.  My husband who minored in English gets exasperated with me when I try to disparage my literary knowledge&#8211;never felt like English was my strong suit. </p>
<p>I loved Eloisa&#8217;s love scene with Josie and Mayne where she used the phrase &#8220;like a forgiving wind&#8230;&#8221;.  Sorry I can&#8217;t remember the rest.</p>
<p>How about the medical&#8211;&#8221;He was on me like a rash&#8221;.</p>
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		<title>By: Hellion</title>
		<link>http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/08/making-your-own-metaphors/#comment-4536</link>
		<dc:creator>Hellion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 19:01:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Renee! Thanks for the flyby. I hope you're doing okay--and come back soon. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Renee! Thanks for the flyby. I hope you&#8217;re doing okay&#8211;and come back soon. <img src='http://romancewritersrevenge.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<title>By: Renee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Renee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 18:54:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>*waves*

Just stopping by real quick to say hi.

Love the new ship.

Renee</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*waves*</p>
<p>Just stopping by real quick to say hi.</p>
<p>Love the new ship.</p>
<p>Renee</p>
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		<title>By: terrio</title>
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		<dc:creator>terrio</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 16:39:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I forgot about "White on rice."  That's a good one.  And I have said, "I'd like to sop that boy up with a biscuit" which I clearly picked up in the south.  LOL!

What is the one that goes something like, "Well I'll be dipped in sh*t"?  And I think something about "sh*t on a log".  Maybe as fast as....?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I forgot about &#8220;White on rice.&#8221;  That&#8217;s a good one.  And I have said, &#8220;I&#8217;d like to sop that boy up with a biscuit&#8221; which I clearly picked up in the south.  LOL!</p>
<p>What is the one that goes something like, &#8220;Well I&#8217;ll be dipped in sh*t&#8221;?  And I think something about &#8220;sh*t on a log&#8221;.  Maybe as fast as&#8230;.?</p>
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		<title>By: Hellion</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hellion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 16:28:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>*laughs cruelly* Well, yes, Tiff, of course...actually I'd just dump you in the middle of a battlefield historical site during the hottest days of summer and make you walk the 10 miles back to the car...that's far more fun. 

Janga, I totally agree. We need to send Teresa flowers. She got me started but you kept fueling the fire with "Hey, did you know there was another one?" and on and on. I'm going to miss that series. But I'm with you. I'd read anything she wrote at this point. The phone book would be endlessly fascinating with her twist on it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*laughs cruelly* Well, yes, Tiff, of course&#8230;actually I&#8217;d just dump you in the middle of a battlefield historical site during the hottest days of summer and make you walk the 10 miles back to the car&#8230;that&#8217;s far more fun. </p>
<p>Janga, I totally agree. We need to send Teresa flowers. She got me started but you kept fueling the fire with &#8220;Hey, did you know there was another one?&#8221; and on and on. I&#8217;m going to miss that series. But I&#8217;m with you. I&#8217;d read anything she wrote at this point. The phone book would be endlessly fascinating with her twist on it.</p>
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		<title>By: Hellion</title>
		<link>http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/04/08/making-your-own-metaphors/#comment-4532</link>
		<dc:creator>Hellion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 16:16:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>*LOL* I love "white on rice"--I use that one too. "I'd be on him like white on rice" which has morphed into "I'd so like to spider-monkey his ass." Which I mean far more romantically than it sounds.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*LOL* I love &#8220;white on rice&#8221;&#8211;I use that one too. &#8220;I&#8217;d be on him like white on rice&#8221; which has morphed into &#8220;I&#8217;d so like to spider-monkey his ass.&#8221; Which I mean far more romantically than it sounds.</p>
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		<title>By: Tiffany</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tiffany</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 16:15:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You just enjoy riling me up and dumping me into a pit of gators... you cruel woman you... :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You just enjoy riling me up and dumping me into a pit of gators&#8230; you cruel woman you&#8230; <img src='http://romancewritersrevenge.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<title>By: Tiffany</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tiffany</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 16:14:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well you don't write 'light' chicklit. That's the stuff that drives me apeshit.  Just because you write first person doesn't mean you are chicklit. I wouldn't call it chicklit.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well you don&#8217;t write &#8216;light&#8217; chicklit. That&#8217;s the stuff that drives me apeshit.  Just because you write first person doesn&#8217;t mean you are chicklit. I wouldn&#8217;t call it chicklit.  <img src='http://romancewritersrevenge.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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