Comments on: Untitled http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/ Hard to Intimidate, Too Damned Drunk to Care Thu, 04 Dec 2008 06:28:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Sin http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6222 Sin Wed, 28 May 2008 21:13:30 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6222 Lisa- You have a way with words babe. Lisa- You have a way with words babe.

]]> By: Sin http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6221 Sin Wed, 28 May 2008 21:13:03 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6221 Kathy- You deserved a boost! And the positive comments were all well deserved! Kathy- You deserved a boost! And the positive comments were all well deserved!

]]> By: Sin http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6220 Sin Wed, 28 May 2008 21:12:15 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6220 Marn- I can agree with that. A title will do a lot for you if it catches someone's eye. I'm more than willing to take advice on changing it if it gets published. Marn- I can agree with that. A title will do a lot for you if it catches someone’s eye. I’m more than willing to take advice on changing it if it gets published.

]]> By: Lisa http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6218 Lisa Wed, 28 May 2008 17:32:34 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6218 I am loving Kathy's first lines. Anyone who starts off a novel with undulated in the first sentence is a winner in my book. One of my fav words of all time:) I must say in my WIP it's used to describe perpetual motion of the very best kind. *g* I am loving Kathy’s first lines. Anyone who starts off a novel with undulated in the first sentence is a winner in my book. One of my fav words of all time:) I must say in my WIP it’s used to describe perpetual motion of the very best kind. *g*

]]> By: Kathy http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6217 Kathy Wed, 28 May 2008 16:56:07 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6217 :-) Thanks for all the positive comments. You've given me a great boost today! The rub is an editor will change the title even if you really like it. I know few authors who actually get to keep their original titles. :-) Thanks for all the positive comments. You’ve given me a great boost today!

The rub is an editor will change the title even if you really like it. I know few authors who actually get to keep their original titles.

]]> By: Marnee Jo http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6216 Marnee Jo Wed, 28 May 2008 16:35:32 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6216 I love the black widow witch premise, Kathy! And No Where to Run is cool too, Hal. I spend a lot of time thinking it over, though I do admit Ter is probably right and I'm sure that titles are changed more often than not. But, I want the editor/agent/etc who reads my MS to be drawn in any way I can manage it. I think a catchy title can be a good hook. I love the black widow witch premise, Kathy! And No Where to Run is cool too, Hal.

I spend a lot of time thinking it over, though I do admit Ter is probably right and I’m sure that titles are changed more often than not. But, I want the editor/agent/etc who reads my MS to be drawn in any way I can manage it. I think a catchy title can be a good hook.

]]> By: haleigh http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6215 haleigh Wed, 28 May 2008 16:06:42 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6215 Sin - none of my titles have ever been mine. Tracy from TBC does all my titling for me. I have a feeling I'm going to be sending her the rough draft, begging for her to read it and come up with a title :) Or I'll use you. I'll use somebody - LOL. Kathy - what a great premise! I love the creepy vibe the title "love never dies" takes on in light of a black widow. Nice! Terri - thanks. It gets the point across, I just wanted something a little more.......I don't know. Which of course, is the problem. I have no idea what I'm trying to convey. I like your plan - let an editor figure it out :) Sin - none of my titles have ever been mine. Tracy from TBC does all my titling for me. I have a feeling I’m going to be sending her the rough draft, begging for her to read it and come up with a title :) Or I’ll use you. I’ll use somebody - LOL.

Kathy - what a great premise! I love the creepy vibe the title “love never dies” takes on in light of a black widow. Nice!

Terri - thanks. It gets the point across, I just wanted something a little more…….I don’t know. Which of course, is the problem. I have no idea what I’m trying to convey. I like your plan - let an editor figure it out :)

]]> By: Sin http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6214 Sin Wed, 28 May 2008 15:30:57 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6214 I love this premise for the para Kathy! Nothing better than a black widow witch! I would totally eat that book up! I love this premise for the para Kathy! Nothing better than a black widow witch! I would totally eat that book up!

]]> By: terrio http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6213 terrio Wed, 28 May 2008 15:23:59 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6213 Oh, that's even better. Nothing like starting in the middle of the action. LOL! Oh, that’s even better. Nothing like starting in the middle of the action. LOL!

]]> By: Kathy http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2008/05/28/untitled/#comment-6212 Kathy Wed, 28 May 2008 15:12:07 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=242#comment-6212 Sin, thanks for the kudos on my titles. I'm never sure how they hold up. Actually Love Never Dies is a paranormal romance, strangely enough about a Black Widow, witch, who sucks the life out of her husbands in order to stay alive. She's seeking a stone which will give her the power to live and love forever. My heroine is the keeper of the stone and must keep her hero from falling into the Black Widow's clutches so her lover will not die. (Cliche?) Terrio, my card playing heroine is actually the prize of said card game. :-) Sin, thanks for the kudos on my titles. I’m never sure how they hold up.

Actually Love Never Dies is a paranormal romance, strangely enough about a Black Widow, witch, who sucks the life out of her husbands in order to stay alive. She’s seeking a stone which will give her the power to live and love forever. My heroine is the keeper of the stone and must keep her hero from falling into the Black Widow’s clutches so her lover will not die. (Cliche?)

Terrio, my card playing heroine is actually the prize of said card game. :-)

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