Because I Said So
Monday, June 23rd, 2008
This weekend I’m attending a writer’s retreat with my local RWA chapter. For fun, it was suggested that we try to write an 850 word piece in a genre in which we would never write. That meant I could write Inspirational or Paranormal. I chose Paranormal.
First I have to say I have nothing against Paranormal. It’s a huge seller right now and offers lots of great stuff for readers. But my practical streak together with my lack of ability to suspend disbelief has always made it difficult for me to enjoy it. Which is why I was so surprised to find myself enjoying the writing.
It turns out, when you create your own world and you put it in the Paranormal realm, you can do anything you want. Who knew?! It’s like when you become a parent and finally get to use the answer, “Because I said so.” It’s so cool. I created demons that can blend in with humans, but unlike humans don’t need food, water or sleep. And if someone asks why, I can say, “Because I said so.” I am LOVING this.
So, bad guys are done. Now I needed an Alpha hero (something I’ve never done), a kick ass heroine (something I’ve never done), and darkness (something I’ve never done). No problem. My hero was inspired by a Breaking Benjamin song called Evil Angel. Here’s his description.
Eyes the deep blue of lapis lazuli stared into my soul. Hair the color of blackest night fell in waves around his shoulders and made the fairness of his skin and the luster of his eyes all the more pronounced for it’s darkness. He wasn’t the largest man I’d ever seen, but he had to be close. Power poured off him like radiation, and a voice in the back of my mind warned he was likely twice as deadly.
The story is written in first person from the heroine’s POV which limited much description of her, but we do learn she works on the Termination Team, a group that battles the demons, and she does get to kick one of the bad guys in the nuts. Other than putting her in leather, that’s as kick ass as I managed to make her. But if there were more words, she’d kick lots more ass.
Now I needed darkness. That was going to be the tough part. You see, my voice calls for sarcasm and humor. Unless I make a concerted effort, sarcastic lines show up in my stuff with little or no effort on my part. After much struggle and at least one rewrite, here’s the opening that sets the scene.
Evil permeated the air. It lingered around the dumpsters, lurked in the shadows, and oozed in the scattered pools of water like an oil slick. A bulb at the end of the alley flickered dimly every few seconds, providing little light to battle back the dark. The sliver of moon over head provided no light at all.
This may never grow into any more than 850 words, but doing this exercise has taught me several things. The most important being that I can write in a genre that I never believed I could. And enjoy doing it. Again, who knew?
If you’re a writer, is there a genre in which you truly don’t believe you could write? If so, what genre would that be and why? If you’re a reader, is there a genre you’ve never tried because you don’t think it’s your thing? If so, what is that genre and what would make you change your mind and give it a try?