Comments on: The Art of Seduction *g http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/ Hard to Intimidate, Too Damned Drunk to Care Thu, 11 Mar 2010 20:03:53 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: 2nd Chance http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21092 2nd Chance Sat, 27 Jun 2009 16:33:49 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21092 - polishing the glasses and tankards from Friday. 2nd Chance leans on the bar and slips Sin's glass away to be cleaned... Tol' ya! Ain't she impressive? I thought she summed yer story up brilliantly, Sin! We'll 'ave ta ask her back in a few months. I wanna try the exercise with the ingredient label... ;) - polishing the glasses and tankards from Friday. 2nd Chance leans on the bar and slips Sin’s glass away to be cleaned…

Tol’ ya! Ain’t she impressive? I thought she summed yer story up brilliantly, Sin! We’ll ‘ave ta ask her back in a few months. I wanna try the exercise with the ingredient label…
;)

]]> By: Sin http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21091 Sin Sat, 27 Jun 2009 16:22:24 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21091 OMgosh! How does she do that! Julie, wow! OMgosh! How does she do that!

Julie, wow!

]]> By: Margay http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21090 Margay Sat, 27 Jun 2009 12:16:43 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21090 Shapeshifter Micah Sloane will do anything to protect his kind from the threat of outsiders. Reluctant empath Shiloh Beck will do anything to escape from a dangerous organization. Fate brings them together, but will they survive when the legend of the wolves collides with the men behind the Institute? Shapeshifter Micah Sloane will do anything to protect his kind from the threat of outsiders. Reluctant empath Shiloh Beck will do anything to escape from a dangerous organization. Fate brings them together, but will they survive when the legend of the wolves collides with the men behind the Institute?

]]> By: Di R http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21089 Di R Sat, 27 Jun 2009 09:21:10 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21089 Julie, It's perfect! I've been stuck in my story for over a week and suddenly the light bulb just went on. Thank You!! Di Julie,

It’s perfect!

I’ve been stuck in my story for over a week and suddenly the light bulb just went on.

Thank You!!

Di

]]> By: Julie Rowe http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21087 Julie Rowe Sat, 27 Jun 2009 03:23:28 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21087 It's been a pleasure sailing with you! Thanks for having me and for all the rum (thanks to the scalawags I needed it!). :-) Cheers, Julie It’s been a pleasure sailing with you! Thanks for having me and for all the rum (thanks to the scalawags I needed it!). :-)

Cheers, Julie

]]> By: Marnee Jo http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21086 Marnee Jo Sat, 27 Jun 2009 02:01:50 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21086 Oh, wow! Thanks Julie! I think I can tweak that and work with it. :) And thanks everyone for your good wishes on my allergies. Ugh. It's been raining here for weeks and now it's all humid. First it was mold spores and now I have no idea what is causing it. I feel ok now. Drugs help. LOL!! Oh, wow! Thanks Julie! I think I can tweak that and work with it. :)

And thanks everyone for your good wishes on my allergies. Ugh. It’s been raining here for weeks and now it’s all humid. First it was mold spores and now I have no idea what is causing it. I feel ok now. Drugs help. LOL!!

]]> By: terrio http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21085 terrio Sat, 27 Jun 2009 01:54:54 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21085 Great job, Di! And great job Julie changing it up. It's almost like we're giving you play-do and your genius turns it into classy pottery. LOL! Thanks so much for being here! Great job, Di! And great job Julie changing it up. It’s almost like we’re giving you play-do and your genius turns it into classy pottery. LOL!

Thanks so much for being here!

]]> By: Julie Rowe http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21084 Julie Rowe Sat, 27 Jun 2009 01:50:40 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21084 Di, I think this is really cute! I also think you could have fun with it. Here's an example, I'm probably off base with what you've written, but I wanted to show you how you could play around with the pitch to get something eye-catching. :-) Sick and tired of being smothered by over-protective brothers, Caitlyn Donahue has just bought her dream ‘free of male testosterone’ home situated near a peaceful orchard. But the day she gets the keys, she discovers one of her brother’s muscle-bound army buddies walking around the place like he owns it and he tells her he’s planning to bulldoze the place for a housing development. This means war! Am I close? :-) Cheers, Julie Di, I think this is really cute! I also think you could have fun with it. Here’s an example, I’m probably off base with what you’ve written, but I wanted to show you how you could play around with the pitch to get something eye-catching. :-)

Sick and tired of being smothered by over-protective brothers, Caitlyn Donahue has just bought her dream ‘free of male testosterone’ home situated near a peaceful orchard. But the day she gets the keys, she discovers one of her brother’s muscle-bound army buddies walking around the place like he owns it and he tells her he’s planning to bulldoze the place for a housing development. This means war!

Am I close? :-)

Cheers, Julie

]]> By: ReneeLynnScott http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21083 ReneeLynnScott Sat, 27 Jun 2009 01:05:46 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21083 Stopping to say, YOU GO SABRINA! That first time is always hard and you stepped out and gave it a go. Stopping to say, YOU GO SABRINA! That first time is always hard and you stepped out and gave it a go.

]]> By: Di R http://romancewritersrevenge.com/2009/06/26/the-art-of-seduction-g/comment-page-2/#comment-21082 Di R Sat, 27 Jun 2009 00:55:01 +0000 http://romancewritersrevenge.com/?p=639#comment-21082 Hi Julie, I noticed on your website that you are giving your Query Letters That Sell class next April for the NEORWA. That is my local chapter, so I'll be there ready to learn more. You asked for it, so here goes: Caitlyn Donahue wants a place of her own, away from her over-protective brothers,she purchases her dream house situated near an orchard. The day she gets her keys she finds Devin Alexander,her brothers old army buddy, walking around her home. His company has bought the orchard, and he mistakenly believes her house, and is planning to put in a housing development. Ugh, this is bad. Di Hi Julie,

I noticed on your website that you are giving your Query Letters That Sell class next April for the NEORWA. That is my local chapter, so I’ll be there ready to learn more.

You asked for it, so here goes:

Caitlyn Donahue wants a place of her own, away from her over-protective brothers,she purchases her dream house situated near an orchard. The day she gets her keys she finds Devin Alexander,her brothers old army buddy, walking around her home. His company has bought the orchard, and he mistakenly believes her house, and is planning to put in a housing development.

Ugh, this is bad.

Di

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