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		<title>By: Carrie Lofty</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carrie Lofty</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 14:54:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Renee, my only advice is a snarky comment from somewhere in the world of writing fiction. I don&#039;t remember where it came from, but I try to keep it in mind when I read: Leave out the bits you&#039;d skip. 

In other words, even though you love talking about your particular subject matter, cut the parts where you might be tempted to, you know...skim. It&#039;s kind of offensive to think that, like--oh, no, I never skim! But I do. All the time. But generally it&#039;s other people&#039;s books!

If you have too much historical info in your romance, it cuts in on the romance time. That&#039;s what your readers are really there for, so reward them with the hot lovin&#039; and sizzling tension--or at least with some witty banter. The details we love to research aren&#039;t necessarily the details that make readers what to keep reading. 

OK, that&#039;s all I have for this morning. We&#039;re due for 6-10 inches of snow here tomorrow. Good thing I live in a condo with a snow removal service! There&#039;s no other way to live in Wisconsin! Keep warm, everyone...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Renee, my only advice is a snarky comment from somewhere in the world of writing fiction. I don&#8217;t remember where it came from, but I try to keep it in mind when I read: Leave out the bits you&#8217;d skip. </p>
<p>In other words, even though you love talking about your particular subject matter, cut the parts where you might be tempted to, you know&#8230;skim. It&#8217;s kind of offensive to think that, like&#8211;oh, no, I never skim! But I do. All the time. But generally it&#8217;s other people&#8217;s books!</p>
<p>If you have too much historical info in your romance, it cuts in on the romance time. That&#8217;s what your readers are really there for, so reward them with the hot lovin&#8217; and sizzling tension&#8211;or at least with some witty banter. The details we love to research aren&#8217;t necessarily the details that make readers what to keep reading. </p>
<p>OK, that&#8217;s all I have for this morning. We&#8217;re due for 6-10 inches of snow here tomorrow. Good thing I live in a condo with a snow removal service! There&#8217;s no other way to live in Wisconsin! Keep warm, everyone&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: 2nd Chance</title>
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		<dc:creator>2nd Chance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 02:28:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What!? Where did you get that? Though...oh, you&#039;re probably right... I&#039;ve lived here 50 years and only been in a handful of them... Only one that really scared me. And didn&#039;t live close enough to the big Loma Prieta quake to feel that one!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What!? Where did you get that? Though&#8230;oh, you&#8217;re probably right&#8230; I&#8217;ve lived here 50 years and only been in a handful of them&#8230; Only one that really scared me. And didn&#8217;t live close enough to the big Loma Prieta quake to feel that one!</p>
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		<title>By: Hellie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hellie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 02:00:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re far mroe likely to get cancer from drinking the water in California than being in an earthquake. *LOL* California is lovely, though I still prefer the Gulf of Mexico for my ocean of choice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re far mroe likely to get cancer from drinking the water in California than being in an earthquake. *LOL* California is lovely, though I still prefer the Gulf of Mexico for my ocean of choice.</p>
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		<title>By: 2nd Chance</title>
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		<dc:creator>2nd Chance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 01:54:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, we know what to keep an eye out fer wit&#039; mudslides. They don&#039;t come outta no where. And earthquakes? Well, there ain&#039;t nothin&#039; ya can do &#039;bout them &#039;cept be ready wit&#039; supplies. Much like a tornado. &#039;Cept we don&#039;t have an earthquake season every year!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, we know what to keep an eye out fer wit&#8217; mudslides. They don&#8217;t come outta no where. And earthquakes? Well, there ain&#8217;t nothin&#8217; ya can do &#8217;bout them &#8216;cept be ready wit&#8217; supplies. Much like a tornado. &#8216;Cept we don&#8217;t have an earthquake season every year!</p>
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		<title>By: Renee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Renee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 01:53:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll keep my snow thank you very much. Earthquakes scare the bejesus out of me, those mudslides don&#039;t look to fun either. Of course, we have tornadoes, but usually we have some sort of warning.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll keep my snow thank you very much. Earthquakes scare the bejesus out of me, those mudslides don&#8217;t look to fun either. Of course, we have tornadoes, but usually we have some sort of warning.</p>
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		<title>By: 2nd Chance</title>
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		<dc:creator>2nd Chance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 01:35:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Give me a year and I&#039;ll have me guest room set up and visitors are welcome ta travel ta the lovely place I live...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Give me a year and I&#8217;ll have me guest room set up and visitors are welcome ta travel ta the lovely place I live&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Hellie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hellie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 01:19:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Careful, Chance, you&#039;re just asking for a stabbing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Careful, Chance, you&#8217;re just asking for a stabbing.</p>
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		<title>By: 2nd Chance</title>
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		<dc:creator>2nd Chance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 00:41:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Aye, the cost a&#039; livin&#039; be terrible. And we do get earthquakes, Renee... And mudslides when the rain gets ta be too much...

I did some rum tastin&#039; a few nights ago, as me DH made up fer losin&#039; all the rum samplers we brought back from the cruise... I&#039;ll mix up somethin&#039; good...

A blast a&#039; California dreamin&#039;...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Aye, the cost a&#8217; livin&#8217; be terrible. And we do get earthquakes, Renee&#8230; And mudslides when the rain gets ta be too much&#8230;</p>
<p>I did some rum tastin&#8217; a few nights ago, as me DH made up fer losin&#8217; all the rum samplers we brought back from the cruise&#8230; I&#8217;ll mix up somethin&#8217; good&#8230;</p>
<p>A blast a&#8217; California dreamin&#8217;&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Bo'sun</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bo'sun</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 00:17:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Make that a hot rum toddy. LOL!

If only this paradise didn&#039;t come wit a cost o&#039;livin&#039; that be out of this world. LOL! (Seriously, I&#039;m still considering living out there someday. Once they get that economy fixed and me kiddo is well and grown.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Make that a hot rum toddy. LOL!</p>
<p>If only this paradise didn&#8217;t come wit a cost o&#8217;livin&#8217; that be out of this world. LOL! (Seriously, I&#8217;m still considering living out there someday. Once they get that economy fixed and me kiddo is well and grown.)</p>
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		<title>By: Renee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Renee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 00:10:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Chance, is this where &lt;i&gt;I&lt;/i&gt; feed ya to the wee fishies? I&#039;m sure Cap&#039;n wouldn&#039;t mind one bit. Damn, but me bloody, feckin, frigid toes are turn&#039;n black within me boots. Where&#039;s the rum, wench? :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Chance, is this where <i>I</i> feed ya to the wee fishies? I&#8217;m sure Cap&#8217;n wouldn&#8217;t mind one bit. Damn, but me bloody, feckin, frigid toes are turn&#8217;n black within me boots. Where&#8217;s the rum, wench? <img src='http://romancewritersrevenge.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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